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A drop blood
A drop of life
A drop of me
Now on the floor
Drip drop, drip drop
No betrayal anymore
Drip drop, drip drop
No more icy words
Drip drop, drip drop
No more stabs at me
Drip drop, drip drop
It's less than the pain...
Of being here,
Living here
Too late to change
Feelings of this...watching this
Just let me go
A drop of life
A drop of me
Now on the floor
Drip drop, drip drop
No betrayal anymore
Drip drop, drip drop
No more icy words
Drip drop, drip drop
No more stabs at me
Drip drop, drip drop
It's less than the pain...
Of being here,
Living here
Too late to change
Feelings of this...watching this
Just let me go
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Now...there is reasoning why I put my work thoughts in prose rather than poetry:
1) It's not quite poetry...more like lyrics ((and I know they're similar but I don't see mine as that good))
2) They're too...non metaphoric for poetry in my mind. I look at someone's work ((like Earthbound Angel's)) and it's all...WOW like. I see hers as poetry...not mine.
1) It's not quite poetry...more like lyrics ((and I know they're similar but I don't see mine as that good))
2) They're too...non metaphoric for poetry in my mind. I look at someone's work ((like Earthbound Angel's)) and it's all...WOW like. I see hers as poetry...not mine.
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